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The UKAF’s Critiques And Commentaries

What Makes Us Special

We are a small team struggling to make ends meet with the activities we engage in. We love what we do and we hope that with the little help we have from our supporters, we’d be able to move forward. That is what makes us special.

“To strive, to seek, to find, and not to yield”

the Victorian poet Alfred, Lord Tennyson (1809–1892)

Le Tueur En Série Masqué

Lights, cameras, action and more. A serial killer that has everyone wanting to read this fiction. What people think about such thrilling mystery.

In quoting others, we cite ourselves, so says Julio Florencio Cortázar.

I felt a spark with the picture and developed a whole new mysterious world in Marseille, France quite different from what we are used to in our everyday lives. I am very excited that this work of art was the world’s way of discovering me and my talent.

Ms Aisha Olanrewaju

Mr Oketunbi O. O.

A wonderful short story that should be turned into a full story and/or novel. I honestly doff my hat for you, Aisha.

Mr Tosin A. A.

Although I have disputes with the girl not having been a sharp cookie, it was a wonderfully written story. I quote “it was her fault”.

Ms Precious E. O.

I love this! What a nice write-up; it looked so professional, although, it was a little scary too. You’re a good writer, Aisha.
Keep it up!



Bravo! A short, brief and straightforward message. The world herself is indeed strange. We beseech guidance from above.

Mr O. Habeeb A. — Jigaba



Let’s make something beautiful together.

OTHER COMMENTARIES

MS FATEEMAH I.

Quite interesting and inspiring!

With what I saw, I would say “Wow. This is a very nice write-up, Ma Shaa Allah”. I am as surprised as I am impressed. She is so good; I felt like I was reading a foreign book. And she doesn’t even write amateurishly!
I would love to see her other works, honestly. Keep up the good work, Aisha!

Rating: 5 out of 5.
MR TOLU A.

It is really nice. I felt like I was reading a novel! She has a good use of English also.

Rating: 5 out of 5.
MR GEORGE O.

For me, it was the use of words and attention to detail.

Rating: 5 out of 5.
MR MELODY A.

Written like it was by a professional author, I had to pause at intervals to look up the dictionary. Although the story was beautifully written, it seems a bit too esoteric. By nature, I am a bibliophobe, but with what she wrote, I wished there was a button to love this short story instead.

Rating: 5 out of 5.

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